Dear Common Core: Send Strategies, Not a Messenger

March 1, 2012 — 12 Comments

In order to familiarize English teachers with the Common Core Language Arts Standards, education policy expert David Coleman has been making the rounds with sample lessons and explanations. A video taken in NY , Close Reading of Text: Letter from Birmingham Jail, Martin Luther King, Jr. from EngageNY on Vimeo, has been posted on the English Companion Ning with the caption, “David Coleman leads a sample exploration of a complex text utilizing strategies outlined within the six shifts in instruction.” The text he discusses is Martin Luther King’s Letter from a Birmingham Jail; the video takes 15 1/2 minutes to watch. One point he makes about extended close reading is particularly alarming. But first, a quick bio on David Coleman (supplied for seminar):

David Coleman is a Founding Partner of Student Achievement Partners, a non-profit  organization that assembles leading thinkers and researchers to design actions to substantially improve student achievement. Most recently, Mr. Coleman and Jason Zimba of Student Achievement Partners played a lead role in developing the Common Core State Standards in math and literacy. Mr. Coleman and Jason Zimba also founded the Grow Network – acquired by McGr aw-Hill in 2005 – with the mission of making assessment results truly useful to teachers, school leaders, parents, and students. Mr. Coleman spent five years at McKinsey & Company, where his work focused on health care, financial institutions, and pro bono service to education. He is a Rhodes Scholar and a graduate of Yale University, Oxford University, and Cambridge University.

Coleman is also on the board of directors of The Equity Project Charter School (TEP), a 480-student middle school in the Washington Heights neighborhood of New York City that opened in September 2009. The school has received much attention because of the  $125,000 salaries paid to teachers. The 2010-2011 results of NY English-Language Arts Assessment given to 5th graders saw a passing rate of  31.3%, below average for comparable schools. The school, however, has moved up 127 ranking points from 2009-2010, and its current standing in ELA assessment is 1972 out of 2291 NY state schools.

I think it is important to note that Coleman is not a teacher. He has not taught in a classroom.
Back to Letter from a Birmingham Jail.

Coleman spends a great deal of time using a New Criticism approach, which is defined at the Bedford St. Martin VirtuaLit website as one that, “…stresses close textual analysis and viewing the text as a carefully crafted, orderly object containing formal, observable patterns…New Critics are more likely than certain other critics to believe and say that the meaning of a text can be known objectively.” This marks a shift from Reader Response Criticism, defined by proponent Stanley Fish as recognizing that the reader is active, and that “Literature exists and signifies when it is read,and its force is an affective one. Furthermore, reading is a temporal process, not a spatial one as formalists assume when they step back and survey the literary work as if it were an object spread out before them.”

Paragraph by paragraph, Coleman analyzes the language and structure of King’s letter, occasionally suggesting  that the letter can be a jumping off point for further study into historical injustice or to Socrates. Exactly how a teacher positions the students to make the intellectual jump to recognizing the strategies of King’s moral argument is not explained in Coleman’s video.  Instead, Coleman offers his possible interpretations of King’s letter. He models a lesson he would give, but he is not providing a strategy. Strategy is a plan of action designed to achieve a vision; Coleman provides an example, not a plan of action. To be clear, critical thinking is a strategy and students need to have critical thinking skills. For example, at the Critical Thinking Community, there are eight elements of reasoning that could serve as strategy, a plan of action, for analyzing King’s letter:

  • What is the text’s purpose?
  • What questions does the text generate or try to answer?
  • What information is contained in this text to answer these questions?
  • What inferences are being made in the text?
  • What key concepts does the reader need to know when reading the text?
  • What assumptions can the reader make about the text (and its author, purpose)?
  • What are the consequences of having read this text?
  • Whose point of view is seen in the text? Whose point of view would be different?

I have not taught King’s letter, but I have taught challenging texts of similar length and complexity. I have taught Elie Wiesel’s 1999 speech to Congress The Perils of Indifference and George Orwell’s 1946 essay, Politics and the English Language. Both pieces were taught in conjunction with a work of fiction rather than “stand alone” pieces. Both texts took one or two periods to have students understand the purpose of the text and the information in the texts. I did not take students through all of the elements of reasoning; these were supplemental texts I chose to support fiction were we studying.

So when I heard Coleman’s position that a teacher should spend six to eight days on this letter, I was taken aback. Really? Six to eight days is two weeks in “school time”, the same amount of time I usually spend teaching the entire memoir Night by Elie Wiesel. Six to eight days represents the class time used for several grammar mini-lessons and two polished essays. Six to eight days represents a unit on (8) sonnets, or a unit on (5) short stories, or the in-class reading of three acts of Shakespeare’s Macbeth.

Again, I must reiterate that Coleman is not a teacher. He has not taught in a classroom.

Back to Letter from a Birmingham Jail.

The genius of King’s letter is how he combines the political and moral argument in an emotional appeal that is, like all great literature, immediately evident. I see the protracted dissection of his letter as akin to tearing a delicious muffin apart in order to reduce the muffin to its ingredients, all that is left are the (still delicious) crumbs. Furthermore, focusing so much attention on this one letter  could be construed as a little insulting to King. I sense he, like any author, did not intend for his work to be parsed in classrooms for such extended periods of time. Close reading is important, but inspection is another. Students generally are not interested in the minutiae of rhetorical composition. I also envision a cadre of dead American authors similarly frustrated rolling in their graves as students are forced to slog through weeks upon weeks of literature study…”Once upon a  midnight dreary…” .

In my classrooms, Coleman’s suggested time of processing extended reading over six to eight days would be met with frustration by many of my students, regardless of reading level. I speak from experience in the classroom where three days (reading, responding, discussing, and writing) in a 9th grade classroom spent on Edgar Allen Poe’s Cask of the Amontillado is sufficient; a fourth day would make them as mad as Montresor. Furthermore, his blithe remark that extended time will better allow all students to participate and make contributions again places the emphasis on time rather than on the engaging strategies that need to be in place.Yes, close reading is a skill, but that skill must be practiced with a multitude of texts. The application of close reading skills from one selection to another is where many students falter.  Strategies that improve a student’s close reading skills from one selection to another, from one genre to another, from one discipline to another should be the focus of teachers implementing Common Core standards. The disproportioned allotment of time to one text reduces the amount of time practicing with other texts. While Coleman could argue that a close reading of six to eight days would be taught only once in order to model close reading skills, the likelihood that students would replicate that lengthy  process on their own is unlikely.

A student’s level of appreciation of a text is still often tied to personal experience. Deep engagement with a text for student is,  as with many adults, a personal experience that cannot be forced. Coleman’s six to eight day formula may make a student aware of elements in a text but not necessarily personally engage in the same manner he espouses. His personal engagement with King’s letter is obviously one of reverence; his video explaining King’s letter borders on proselytizing. In comparison, King did that better-and he didn’t take six days.

12 responses to Dear Common Core: Send Strategies, Not a Messenger


    Another argument for your teacher-led PD: the real experts in the field.

    Richard Tracey March 2, 2012 at 10:53 am

    My close reading of CCSSE finds the term “close reading” used once each in just two standards. With no context clues within CCSSE to learn the Tier III meaning of “close reading” and with all extratextual references barred by David Coleman, I can only conclude that students must read the text types required for those two standards by holding those texts very near to their eyes.


    Hear, hear! Transfer is the critical key that’s missing in Coleman’s talk. And dissecting or bludgeoning a text in order to reach someone else’s pre-determined and supposedly ‘objective’ interpretation will simply send students running to Sparknotes.


    David Coleman is full of shit. I’m curious to know if he went to public school or if he, like Gates and Obama and Duncan, went to private school… Coleman’s sample “lesson” on King’s letter is a perfect example of imaginary teaching to imaginary students. Coleman has absolutely no idea how he would actually bring his students along with him for one paragraph, let alone for six to eight days. I am also amazed at the way he blithely assumes that students will be doing lots and lots of independent reading at home. What planet is he living on? On the planet of elite privilege, of course. People like him and Obama and Gates and Duncan probably DID do a lot of reading–and THAT is where they learned to read well–not from tedious 6-day explications of brief complex texts.


      While I would normally frown on your use of coarse language, David Coleman opened that door when he told his audience, “People don’t really give a sh*t about what you (students) feel and what you (students) think.” Such an attitude polarized many teachers. I do think that time in the classroom is far more valuable than time spent in academic research. Sadly, many of the proponents of CCSS are not teachers. Coleman and his cohorts would certainly benefit from teaching for a few days in my 10th grade class this year. I appreciate the time you took to read my blog.
      Thank you for responding!


    Coleman must be stopped! He’s now head of the College Board. Pretty soon all college-bound students will be taking tests that affect their future which are written by someone who HAS NEVER TAUGHT IN A PUBLIC SCHOOL CLASSROOM. Isn’t there something wrong with this?? I would love to see Coleman spend six days in my classroom teaching that very lesson on Letter from Birmingham Jail. Let him deal with the kids texting under their desks, the chitter-chatter, the kids with recently-dead parents or who are struggling with drugs or sexuality, the kids who have not picked up a book to read in years, for school or otherwise. I wonder how fast he’d change his whole position then! I’m thinking of writing to Coleman and inviting him to teach a lesson in my classroom. Think he’d accept?


      I admit that inviting David Coleman to close read a text with the colorful cast of characters in my period 8/9 is tempting. I also angst over the substantial role he has as a policy make in American education. He has been a student more than he has been a teacher and his personal educational experience (he is a Rhodes Scholar and a graduate of Yale University, Oxford University and Cambridge University) has been very different than the educational experience of the average teacher. He has been informed by an entirely different pedagogy. What concerns me the most is that there is no evidence that any of his designs for education will work…except they will most certainly work for the publishing companies who are directly involved in the new design cycle of test, produce test support materials, retest, redesign test support materials, redesign test, test, etc. While poverty is considered by many to be the number one issue for education today, Coleman’s initiatives are draining financial resources from many of the neediest districts. Like most policy makers, he has no practical experience with the system he is determined to change….if we let him.


    I’ve been obsessing about Coleman’s lesson, and totally agree with you on everything. He doesn’t even get the underlying facts right, nor does he seem interested in them. The statement from the ministers wasn’t even written to King, it was a published statement. This is a real insult in so many ways.


      Thanks! (It is always so much nice to respond to an “agree” comment). I am confident that eventually, the experienced teacher voice will deafen Coleman’s. He has had his moment of fame (and, sadly, The Atlantic cover story…*sigh*). Thank you for taking the time to write.

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